Alone and Unobserved

FlashFic of the Week: The Message

I just published my new flash piece, “The Message,” on my website. Leave any feedback here.

“The Message“
FlashFic, 398 words
Written in response to the exercise “Graffiti“

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2 Responses to “FlashFic of the Week: The Message”

• Karie Says:
  March 21st, 2007 at 8:54 am

  That was very visual. I really liked the touch with the blood, though the syringe seemed a bit jarring. I don’t know why. Probably because I’m a fantasist through and through and expect every fictional society to be agrarian.
• Jér Says:
  March 21st, 2007 at 10:10 am

  Thanks, Karie. By the way, I’ve taken the syringe out and put it back in several times. Right now it’s in, but it might be out again at some point.